Sunday, September 25, 2011

Bye-Bye to Freedom


This story is about a girl that was living with her grandmother. Nadia grow up with her grandmother because her mother works all the day and every day to give Nadia everything she need. Nadia was quiet and shy. Well the time passed and she became a pretty girl.  Sometimes when her mother got home at night they had a little chat about the day they had. Her mother was tired and didn’t talk so much. When Nadia went to high school many guys wanted to hang out with her and be her boyfriend. So one day she decided to have a boyfriend without telling to her mother and grandmother. Her cousin Ana notice that she had a boyfriend and she told to Nadia’s mom. Nadia was in trouble.  During two months she was punished at her room without going anywhere and without going to the school.  Her grandmother didn’t wanted that Nadia has a boyfriend because the guy didn’t was a good boy for her. Nadia’s mom hit her and talks badly; so she was very sad of what was happening with her. The grandmother was very strict, and one day her grandmother took Nadia to live with her cousin Ana. So in that way she couldn’t see her boyfriend. She was far from him.
Then the guy was looking for her, and he found her. When he found her, he offered her to run away with him and she accepted. He took her to live with his family and his family was a crazy family. The mother of this guy and his sister always were fitting on the street with other people. Nadia became doing the same thing like the family of her boyfriend did. She was pregnant of a girl and after a year a boy. Nadia didn’t change her behavior when she had her family and always was fitting with other people. One day they committed a crime, they burn a girl on the house of the victim. Nadia thought that nothing was going to happen to her because the police didn’t arrest her. But when the victim talked the police was right after her and right after the family of her boyfriend. The police took them to jail. Now all of them are in prison. The attorney said that they don’t have getaway because the day that they were going to be free, a person appear on the court and show a video to the judge that they were the people who burn the girl. They were sentence to fifty years to prison, including Nadia.
Lastly, Nadia lost her family, her son and daughter, her mother, her grandmother, and her freedom. The sad thing is that she isn’t going to see her boy and girl grows up. Now she feel sorry about what she did, but for her is too late, she had to be on jail for fifty years. I don’t know how a person can change a lot, if she was totally different when she was a child.  Now her mom can’t do anything about her and she feels guilt because she was not enough time with her.

3 comments:

  1. Marily~ What was your inspiration for this story?

    ReplyDelete
  2. Marily i think the girl made her first mistake when she did not tell the parents about her boyfriend. That was not all her fault though because it seemed as the mother was never really there for her. I cant believe she went to jail but it was because of her and her boyfriends mistakes.

    ReplyDelete
  3. This is a horrible story about Nadia. I think she wanted to make her mom feel bad for her because she did not pay attention to her. All of her acts took her to a wrong way. Now that she is in jail might learn about her own mistakes.

    ReplyDelete